heyy ..bak after a long tym!!wanted to share an experience wid u all..
The other day when classes were cancelled..it was raining continuously (i assume everyone is aware of the recent two days drizzling which has broken many records of this semi arid region ;) )i was looking through the window of my room.. feeling the sprinkle of rain drops against my face.. listening to the soft track (madhuram madhuram)in the background.. enjoying the pleasant weather like everyone else :)suddenly a short poem naturally came into my mind for the first time ever!!i never thought i could ever form even two rhyming lines(though i wished always)..i was amazed wid myself really...later on i xtended the same as it was tooo short ;)
so here i go ...(i am translating it at the end for my northi frnds :) u hav to bear even if it misses essence a bit :P)
my first short poem :)
classes leni ee vela madhuram!
alupannadi leni ee varsham madhuram!
prakasam leni ee pagalu madhuram!
samayam ela gadchindo telupa leni ee anubhuti madhuram!
vela padu leni ee nidra athi madhuram!
nammasakyanga leni ee kavitha allika athyantha madhuram!
madhuram madhuram ee pata madhurathi madhuram!!
this time of no classes is sweet!
this relentless rain is sweet!
this prevailing darkness during day is sweet!
this sense of losing track of time is sweet!
this untimely sleep is sweeter!
this natural flow of poem is sweetest!
this song madhuram madhuram is sweeter than sweetest!
i hope u enjoyed it!!!:):)
poetry n pav...seems like a weird combo :P
ReplyDeletehowevr the creation is not dat weird :P
lol just kiddin...nice one...good to c u writing poems sweetie...mayb one day u'll b able to sing a hindi song well also :P :D
dis was ur hidden talent..:)..
ReplyDeletean added feather in ur cap!!..:)..:D..
poem's too good..:D
Again i will say 1st one is the best one... U have a bright future in writing poems given (Juss kidding) environment should support u :P
ReplyDeleteMarcihipo leni Ne e modhati prayatnam athyantha madhuram !!
@garima thank u :)even i feel its weird ;)zaroor sunaungi bahut jaldi :P
ReplyDelete@aarathi thank u dear:)edo adrustam baundi ala vachindi anthe talent kadu ;)
@malleswar thank u :)ne protsaham tho neku poti vastha le :P
i read ur telugu version...apart from easily decipherable words 'padu' is 1 word..i cud unstnd bcoz f my perenial efforts in d regard f learnin :D
ReplyDelete@swik u must hav understood it as sing ..but dats not the meaning here :P
ReplyDeletehey grt job!....u surprised me...
ReplyDelete@mythi thank u :)i surprised even myself ;)
ReplyDeletemadhuram kavita..i know only dese 2 words in tlgu to apprct ur poem :P
ReplyDeleteaur ha pav..its kavita and not kavitha :P :P
@shivi :)hehe telugu mat pad ..tum logonke liye nahi hai wo:P itne pains leke translate kiya ..angrezi padna:P
ReplyDeletemadhuram madhuram , nenu loved madhuram ;)
ReplyDeleteee kavita chala madhuram ga undi...Nuvvu entha madhuramo anthe madhurmaina kavithalu ilane rasthu undu :)
ReplyDeletemaduram...madhuram...chala chala chala madhuram ...:P
@yesoda
ReplyDelete@chanchal dhanyavadam :)nuvvu kuda madhuranga rasav ;)
Heyaa...chala bagundhi!!..:D..n i second mythi here...a bit of a surprise...ila hidden talents pettukunte ela!!....
ReplyDelete..awesomeness!!...keep writin!!...:):)
..lookin fwd to more..:D...
@keerthi thanx a lot :)yeah even i wanna surprise myself more ;)
ReplyDeletewooow niceeee!!!! poetess pavani!!! ;-)
ReplyDelete@aparna thank u :):D
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